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The strong wind of lies pushes her off
     from the boat    where she thoughts
that she will stay   forever
      but now,    followed by the wind
she fell    deep  
                    deep  
           into the sea..
   
   
   No one is there      
to see her drown..
          She was all alone
but only accompanied     by her past memories
   and regrets      
            and problems
    that    she once have threw them away..
She thoughts    as it all fade    deep into the ocean
            her happiness will be last forever..
   
 
   She began to thought that no one,
     no one    will ever,
ever     save her now…

   
   As she started      being ready      
        to close her eyes,
she felt two hands
      are pulling her up
  up    to the above…

   
  She refuses to open her eyes..
Until    the sunshine
    have reflected    
                  into her eyes..
You will never know someone really love or care for you..Until they show their actions to prove you..

I wrote this while listen to ---> [link] (Meltdown -music video-)

:)
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Dany1908 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
hm was a nice poem...hehe glad i peeked in the group folder
liked how you put the lines and stanzas o.o
in waves :O
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Yoseominkie Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
hehe thank you~ :'3
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FanaticalPublishing Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
I like your work; if you want to get published, look me up: [link]
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Yoseominkie Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you~ ^^ okay then~
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KathraW Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
It's interesting that you had the stanzas move like waves. I like the imagery ^-^
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Yoseominkie Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you ^^
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